That "slow rise" thing you did is such a perfect example of how forcing things never works. It's like when you stop rushing a conversation and let a quiet moment happen, and that's when someone actually tells you the truth. Everything good seems to need that weird, impatient waiting period where it feels like nothing is happening.

Wonder if the client saw it that way from the start, or if the meaning came later? Almost sounds like the redaction had to teach its own lesson.