A teacher told me my stories were too messy and it stuck with me
I was in 4th grade, maybe 10 years old, and we had to write a story about a family trip. I wrote this wild, long thing about going to the Grand Canyon and seeing a bear and getting lost, all in one page. My teacher, Mrs. Ellis, wrote on it, 'Mark, this has good ideas, but it's like a jumbled box of toys. Pick one toy and play with it.' I remember feeling really embarrassed. Now, when I write anything, even just an email at work, I hear that in my head. I stop and think, 'Okay, what's the one main thing here?' before I start typing. It's simple, but it helps me get to the point. Does anyone else have a piece of advice from a teacher that just never left you?